Tuesday 12 August 2014

Narrative Writing

We are learning to write narratives. We are working on describing a character and setting and writing about a problem and solution. Here are 2 amazing narratives we wrote today. Come and see the others in our books.

Once upon a time there was a sparkly, silver, scared seahorse. The seahorse was only a baby. The baby seahorse and mummy lived in a sparkly, silver ocean. One day they baby seahorse got very, very scared. She got so scared that she ran away from her mummy. The seahorse got lost in a cave but a fish showed the way out and they lived happily ever after.
By Emma

Once upon a time there was a scary, mean dragon. Its name was Terror. The dragon lived in Dragon Hotel. Suddenly the dragon got trapped in a dragon trap. It cried “help, help, help.” Luckily the king eagle was circling in the sky. The eagle swooped down and broke the net. The dragon thanked the eagle. They became best friends and they lived happily ever after.

By Lochy

1 comment:

  1. Wow! great stories, and I'm so please that the Seahorse and the Dragon both got to love happily ever after - did they know each other?
    From Julie (Lochy's Mum) Cameron

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